I won't even start with my normal question answer format. I'll just tell it like it is. This entry wasn't even a blog,it was more of a blurb. kind of like the ones you read in the weddings section of the jewish exponent. Except their writers know how to write. I don't know if the critic has just been real busy or his dining partner (HILLARY) is sick of eating dinner at weird place, or what the deal is, but this "blurb" was really froced. I mean, who blogs about what they had on their lunch break. Thats just ridiculous. Perhaps the critic has hit the "writer's wall" and has run out of things to blog about. What I do know is I am more inclined to believe the eagles are happy with donovan mcnabb at quarterback then the critic things this place is blog worthy. It is a complete waste of the 45 seconds is takes to read it (maybe less depending on what level you read on.) I am not even really going to go into the details-there's not enough of them and they don't teach you anything anyhow. Seeing this makes me think maybe i should just start my own original blog. But wod's needs me to critique his writing so very much. So I'll stick with it. A piece of advice though critic. You claim people text you for dinner suggestions. I don't believe this for a second,but if they do, they certainly have lost respect for you after this terrible,terrible effort. Your readers deserve more. I'm hoping for better output soon.
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